Here is part 1 of my 4 part Fisking of the New York Times article. Text in italics are from the article. Regular text are my comments
[I]Tens of thousands of people across the country, their kidneys ruined by Type 2 diabetes, have been forced into the grim routine of dialysis care, and in New York, those patients routinely receive some of the worst treatment, government records show.
At New York dialysis centers, those being treated are more likely to suffer from anemia and are less likely to have enough impurities and excess fluid removed from their blood, allowing more damage to their bodies, according to the records.[/I]
Tens of thousands? Try hundreds of thousands. This is their lead? They first try to establish a nominal connection to diabetes and then point to how people universally, across the country are forced into a grim routine of dialysis care apparently without exception other than it is worse in New York (it is never clear if they mean the City or the State or both). The government records reporting anemia and kt/v must be a reference to CMS web site Dialysis Facility Compare.
Experts say the disparity is caused in part by the fact that New York is dominated by small dialysis providers, many of them run by people with little background in medicine who entered the business to meet the surging demand.
Experts? How about a name. Who exactly is running which clinics? All clinics must have a Medical Director, who would certainly have a background in medicine, don’t they run the clinics? So it is the owner or CEO of the clinic that doesn’t have a medical background? Is Davita CEO Thiry a Nephrologist?
[I]Many of the smaller centers provide good care, experts say, but a lot also lack the money and staff training to compete on a quality-of-care basis with the national dialysis chains that dominate the market across the rest of the country. Newly released patient data show that people who receive their dialysis from a national chain generally fare better than those treated by an independent provider.
Many, a lot[/I] - in journalism I believe these are called weasel words (no offense to weasels) because their presence makes it impossible to fact check the statement. This paragraph seems to say that the national chains dominate the market because of their quality of care, this is not what happened. The newly released patient data is again a reference to the annual update to the Dialysis Facility Compare (DFC) web site which now reports data through the 2005 calendar year.
The article never directly references the DFC and never looks at how the DFC data is generated. Also because the DFC data is old the article reports the state of the renal industry as it existed in 2004 & 2005. In this article FMC & RCG and Davita & Gambro have yet to merge which is confusing.
But the chains are largely blocked from operating in New York by a state law that effectively bars publicly traded companies from owning health care facilities in the state. “With the need for dialysis on the rise, the department is questioning whether it makes sense not to allow these large corporations to participate,” said Jeffrey W. Hammond, a Department of Health spokesman.
Ah, so now we come to the point of the article. And the first quote. So, there are state regulations baring the two large for profit dialysis providers from building or expanding their hegemony to New York the State. Now this is a fair question - are non-profit and small dialysis systems in the interest of the residents of the Empire State? Should the Rubin Center need to compete with Davita or FMC? But the article never clearly states that question instead we are suppose to conclude that government data is showing that New Yorkers are getting shoddy care because of antiquated rules and regulations.
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In 1980, fewer than 50,000 people in the United States needed dialysis to do the work of their kidneys; today, there are more than 350,000, including roughly 24,000 in New York. In 1980, diabetes was the primary cause of kidney failure for fewer than 6,000 dialysis patients; today, the figure is about 150,000.
Survival for them is an ordeal, at best.[/I]
A difficult or painful experience, especially one that severely tests character or endurance? Yes, I suppose three day a week, three hour treatments are an ordeal for many. But that is not renal care at its best. That is not even average renal care. Marty is dialysis an ordeal for your father? This would have been a much more interesting article if the writer had described optimal or even good dialysis care. What strategies have people found, people right there in New York, to lessen the “dialysis ordeal”? How have people changed the ordeal into a burden into an inconvenience?
Again the writer adds the diabetes dimension. In fact having diabetes and needing dialysis is harder than just needing dialysis. However, based on the rest of the article I think highlighting the diabetes link is a way to tie this article into an admirable ongoing diabetes focus at the NY Times and is, no doubt, how this story was pitched to the writer. It is curious that the article’s lead speaks of tens of thousands across the country only to point out here that it’s actually hundreds of thousands - not even mentioning the millions predialyzors with some degree of diminished kidney function.
At a typical dialysis center, patients come in three times a week, typically for four hours at a time. They sit in rows of recliners, dozing, watching television — anything to take their minds off the machines, needles and tubes that siphon blood from their bodies, clean it of impurities like urea, and pump it back in. It is surprisingly quiet; patients are so beset by side effects like fatigue, cramps or thirst, that mere conversation seems like an effort. For all but a few, holding a job is out of the question. Most will never be healthy enough to qualify for a transplant that would free them of this burden, and there are far too few donated kidneys, anyway.
This is a typical dialysis unit? Mere conversation is too great an effort? I assume the reporter is saying the people are at the unit for four hours, hooked up to the machine for just three of those hours judging by the state of the unit’s dialyzors. And it is interesting that the impurity mentioned is the harmless little molecule urea. What about phosphorus and potassium? What would have been interesting would be for the reporter to say how many dialysis units he visited and where exactly?
How about stopping by this one http://www.lowermanhattandialysis.com/ ? I assume it is about a $10 cab ride from the Times office but really you wouldn’t even have to leave the comfort of the cubical, just browse the web site. A 12.8% mortality rate and the web site helpfully notes “All patients accepted - We do not exclude patients for poor health. “ I for one would be very interested in reading about what a day in the life is like for the average dialyzor at the Lower Manhattan Dialysis center. Even better of course would be if the reporter went out to the Rubin Center and talked to the people running that program. Having never spoken to them myself I can not say what their reaction to this article is but I would give their reaction a lot of weight.